Advice to Writers

1. Enter the story

Liked by colleagues

relied on by family

already at the outset

the protagonist is dead.

He is  propped in a coffin

upstairs and to the right.

2. Paint a picture

The living revise planned futures

no less, simple, ordinary & terrible

than his had once been in

a life running straight from adventure

& the experiments of youth to a

decorous married middle age

3. Note the details

with a daughter, a son and one child dead.

A distinguished Public Prosecutor, his

work ambitions increasingly a refuge

as marriage proved difficult but yet demanded

a home and furnishings that safely resembled

those of his circle and the one he aspired to.

4. Make friends with it

So he and his family lived in comfort

in apparent good health and happy

enough if never fully satisfied.

Yet at the margins of satisfaction

unseen physical distress is growing

& eating away at happiness like a cancer.

5. Drop to a deeper level

The dreadful taste of death

grew while all about him

life went on as usual.

Feeling as if pushed into a sack

he despaired finally of choices

long since made or evaded.

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